Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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I miss this summer soo much. Not because it was my first time in the dream country, also because it was my first time when I met such a good people. They was so kind to me and I was in disbeliefs and so upset, that it can't be true. And I even cried in the airport on the way
home. #i'mliterallycriedanhour
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home. #i'mliterallycriedanhour
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This is a good paragraph. It's easy to understand. There are a few little errors I'll help you with here: I miss this summer so much, not only because it was my first time in the dream country, but also because it was the first time I met such good people.
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This is a good paragraph. It's easy to understand. There are a few little errors I'll help you with here:
I miss this summer so much, not only because it was my first time in the dream country, but also because it was the first time I met such good people. They was so kind to me, I couldn't believe it.I felt so emotional. It couldn't be true. I even cried in the airport on the way home.
I miss this summer so much, not only because it was my first time in the dream country, but also because it was the first time I met such good people. They was so kind to me, I couldn't believe it.I felt so emotional. It couldn't be true. I even cried in the airport on the way home.
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This paragraph is pretty well written. It's easy to understand. I'll make a few corrections for you here:
I miss the summer so much, not because it was my first time in the dream country, but also because it was the first time I met such good people. They were so kind to me, I couldn't believe it. I was so emotional. It couldn't be true. I even cried in the airport on the way home.
I miss the summer so much, not because it was my first time in the dream country, but also because it was the first time I met such good people. They were so kind to me, I couldn't believe it. I was so emotional. It couldn't be true. I even cried in the airport on the way home.
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