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Creativeguru Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Enble / enbles..is this sentence correct?


A company seeks to identify their best customers. Once identified, enables companies to communicate with them actively in a drive to foster brand loyalty.
  

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Would this work? A company seeks to identify their best customers. Once identified, [it] enables [ the] companies to communicate with them actively in an [effort / attempt ] a drive to cultivate / promote foster brand loyalty.

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Would this work?

A company seeks to identify their best customers. Once identified, [it] enables [the] companies to communicate with them actively in an [effort / attempt] a drive to cultivate / promote foster brand loyalty.

"foster" sounds a little strange in this context, in my opinion.