can you add a bit of change to the following to make it sound a bit more professional.
Dear........
We are slowing down at this time; however, you will be allowed to collect partial unemployment benefits if the following conditions are met.
1. You must be able to show up to work on a 24 hours notice.
2. You must have a contact number for us to notify you of any changes.
3. You must check in with our office at least twice a week.
If the above conditions are not met, benefits for that week will be denied.
sincerely,
blah blah....
this notice if for a roofing company, can you please help me revise this notice...it just doesnt sound the way i would want it to....
thank you very much
Top answer
Dear ***, Recent economic conditions require us to temporarily reduce our staff. However, you will be able to collect partial unemployment benefits as long as you meet the following requirements: 1. You are available for work on 24 hours notice.
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Recent economic conditions require us to temporarily reduce our staff. However, you will be able to collect partial unemployment benefits as long as you meet the following requirements: 1. You are available for work on 24 hours notice. 2. Your contact phone number is up-to-date and in our files. 3. You check in with the office at least twice per week.