Hello, i have to whrite a email letter to a group leader, aksing for a talk.
How is this:
Dear Mr XXXXXXX, I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is also my main subject. I did a couple of optional interships in the lab. Beside my study I am working for Prof. Dr. XXXXX in the lab and I would like to do my diploma thesis in the Faculty of XXXXX Sciences. Your research theme ist very interesting and I would like very much to talk with you concerning your research theme.
Sincerely,
XXXXX
Waht do you think? Is it ok?
Thanks for reading it.
geo
Top answer
Dear Mr ***, I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is (also) my main subject. I did a couple of optional interships in the lab.
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Dear Mr ***, I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is (also) my main subject. I did a couple of optional interships in the lab. Beside my study(,) I am working for Prof. Dr. *** in the lab and I would like to do my diploma thesis in the Faculty of *** Sciences. Your research theme ist very interest