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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Editor Request: Skill Swap

Swap:

Looking for an editor, consulting or perspective of short articles for print. At your leisure, I have led understood concepts that suffer for spoken-explanation writing, order of significance, phrasing issues-mess requiring an active partner.

I can provide, confidently, perspective on your work under observation and creative conversation. You tell me if you want o hear anything critical (I will not invert my thoughts), I will collaboratively motivate the strongest aspects through discussion.

I can do this for FICTION; I plainly like to lead topics away from theme then ask why that might be fact for something totally irrelevant, then of influence with the supernatural and world issues.

BADLY WORDED: I might say "the double-slit experiment (What The Bleep Do We Know movie) is proof observation changes result, does it also indirectly alter reality and perspective? If at the scene of the crime I am fooled (title? movie) by my interpretation of affirmed event am I able to mourn the victims death? Am I qualified to perceive, er, that prejudice when I doubt my own beliefs? If I now identify with my oppressor am I also eventuating my suffering worthiness/tolerance?

etc.

Date rape? When is a person convinced the choice is right without experiential knowledge? You will just "know" your first time that mutually it's sincere. So if I should decide to teach anything, but especially ESL to "second rate" countries and know that my values/methods are accurate to their environment am I teaching or am I indoctrinating? Am I a drunk frat boy in Canada? also never come back, you know you are.

FIN.

HELP!
  

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Hello Anon; Are you asking for someone to give you suggestions to improve your writing? It's not clear what you want, but your writing does have many problems in its grammar.

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Hello Anon;

Are you asking for someone to give you suggestions to improve your writing?
It's not clear what you want, but your writing does have many problems in its grammar.