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My unforgettable trip to Toronto
I will never forget my splendid trip to Toronto which is one of Canadian cities. I visited a lot of spectacular places in Toronto. One of them was Aquarium of Canada. It has a lot of diverse attractive marine creatures that make you feel you are one of them. The second place was CN Tower. You can see the whole city from the top of CN Tower which is really wonderful.The third place was Toronto Zoo which is the biggest zoo in Canada. In Toronto zoo, you can many amazing animals including bears, wolves, lamas, and so on. The last place I visited was Niagara Falls which is the best place I have ever been to. It is so marvellous especially at night because some lights are cast on the
falls which make it really gorgeous. In conclusion, wanting to visit such an amazing place, I advise you to go to Toronto.
Could you please tell me if there are mistakes?
Thank you in advance.
I will never forget my splendid trip to Toronto which is one of Canadian cities. I visited a lot of spectacular places in Toronto. One of them was Aquarium of Canada. It has a lot of diverse attractive marine creatures that make you feel you are one of them. The second place was CN Tower. You can see the whole city from the top of CN Tower which is really wonderful.The third place was Toronto Zoo which is the biggest zoo in Canada. In Toronto zoo, you can many amazing animals including bears, wolves, lamas, and so on. The last place I visited was Niagara Falls which is the best place I have ever been to. It is so marvellous especially at night because some lights are cast on the
falls which make it really gorgeous. In conclusion, wanting to visit such an amazing place, I advise you to go to Toronto.
Could you please tell me if there are mistakes?
Thank you in advance.
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I will never forget my splendid trip to Toronto which is one of a beautiful city in Cana da. ian cities. I visited a lot of spectacular places in Toronto.
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Thank you so much. I have one more question which is is it correct to say more than one tense in a paragraph?
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AnonymousI have one more question which is is it correct to say more than one tense in a paragraph?In general, there is no limit to the number of verb forms that can appear in a paragraph.
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