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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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E-mail answer to a job offer, please help

1font00Unfortunately, I have been offred a job 2 months after starting a special course for 2years and already paid for it. Since my english level is still not good enough, I would be very grateful if somebody could help me reviewing the text below. I would like to get some informations about the job (salary, conditions, location...) and keep in touch with the employer.02font02br
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01font00Dear Andrew,02font02br
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01font00I would like to apologize for not being able to answer your e-mail on time. Although I do not have all details about this position (Salary, work conditions, ... ), I assume it should be very interesting.02font02br
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01font00I would like to let you know I am from france, I came to London almost 6 months ago in order to improve my English Language Skills, and I thought it would be very useful for my career to take an MBA course after finishing my English one. So the plan is, I am on my English course now and will be studying for an MBA degree by the beginning of june 2007. Please refer to the attached C.V. 02font02br
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01font00I would like to know, if possible, how did you get my details (the name of the website if found on the web). Is the the position offred in Angola? 02font02br
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01font00I wish I will have this opportunity and keep contact with you for future collaboration and I would be very pleased to supply you with any further information (or any question, comment or suggestion) you may need, 02font02br
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0Dear 01b 00Mr (Last name):02b 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00I would like to apologize for not being able to answer your e-mail in01b 00 a timely fashion02b 00. 01b 00The position you offer sounds02b 00 very interesting01b 00; is this the position offered in Angola? 02b 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00I would like to let you know 01b 00that 02b 00I am from 01b 00France; 02b 00I came to London almost 01b 00six 02b 00months ago in order to improve my English 01b 00language skills02b 00, and I thought it would be very useful for my career to take an MBA 01b 00program02b 00 after finishing my English 01b 00course02b 00.

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00I would like to apologize for not being able to answer your e-mail in01b00 a timely fashion02b00. 01b00The position you offer sounds02b00 very interesting01b00; is this the position offered in Angola? I am curious as t
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