Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
doubts in the phrases
"This is the first mail I am receiving from ******.I Got selected by
******* on 14th April 2013 & received offer letter with joining date on 28th
November 2013. I didn't received any kind of mail asking about confirmation of
accepting offer letter from your side as you mentioned in the previous mail,
but voluntarily I had sent a mail where I have confirmed my acceptance of
offer letter & willingness of joining in your concern via e-mail which dated
22nd June 2013. I didn't received any response for that mail too. So I have
queried Mr.XXXXX who arranged this placement process there too I didn't
received any kind of response. So I waited up to 28th November 2013 which
is our joining date as per the offer letter, up to that date there is not
even a single response I got from ******."//
I think the above paragraph has some grammar mistakes, so please find and correct that for me?..
******* on 14th April 2013 & received offer letter with joining date on 28th
November 2013. I didn't received any kind of mail asking about confirmation of
accepting offer letter from your side as you mentioned in the previous mail,
but voluntarily I had sent a mail where I have confirmed my acceptance of
offer letter & willingness of joining in your concern via e-mail which dated
22nd June 2013. I didn't received any response for that mail too. So I have
queried Mr.XXXXX who arranged this placement process there too I didn't
received any kind of response. So I waited up to 28th November 2013 which
is our joining date as per the offer letter, up to that date there is not
even a single response I got from ******."//
I think the above paragraph has some grammar mistakes, so please find and correct that for me?..
Top answer
This is the first mail I have received from ***. I was selected by *** on 14 April 2013 and received an offer letter with a joining date of 28 November. I didn't receive any kind of subsequent mail asking me to confirm acceptance of the offer, but I did send an e-mail confirming my acceptance and willingness to join your concern on 22 June.
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This is the first mail I have received from ***.
I was selected by *** on 14 April 2013 and received an offer letter with a joining date of 28 November. I didn't receive any kind of subsequent mail asking me to confirm acceptance of the offer, but I did send an e-mail confirming my acceptance and willingness to join your concern on 22 June. I didn't receive any response to that
I was selected by *** on 14 April 2013 and received an offer letter with a joining date of 28 November. I didn't receive any kind of subsequent mail asking me to confirm acceptance of the offer, but I did send an e-mail confirming my acceptance and willingness to join your concern on 22 June. I didn't receive any response to that
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