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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Done, he...

Jeff enters the restroom, goes to a urinal and takes a pee. Done, he heads back out.

Does this work? Can I use "done" to connect the two sentences? Is it natural?

  

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anonymous Does this work? Can I use "done" to connect the two sentences? Is it natural?

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anonymousDoes this work? Can I use "done" to connect the two sentences? Is it natural?

That's fine, except I must say that's a pretty lackluster scene.