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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Does this sentence sound fine?

Hi,

Does the following sentence sound fine?

"Voice disorders can threaten employment position and impose a negative impact on working quality of life."


Thanks!

  

Top answer

No. I suggest this. " Clive

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No.

I suggest this. "Voice disorders can threaten employment and negatively impact a person's quality of life."

Clive