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0LCR meter’s terminals were connected with Copper (Cu)  connector to get the Zero capacitance. That capacitance made from the interior  parts of the LCR meter. Then all capacitor (dielectric) samples were labeled  According those name. Then LCR meter’s frequency was selected (set) according  our practical requirement, such as 50 Hz, 100Hz, 1000Hz, up to 5000000Hz.Then initial  LCR’s frequency was set 50 Hz. then dielectric sample was installed in to the device.  Then readings (capacitance and D value) were taken from the LCR meter display.02br02br00Same procedures were followed for each dielectric sample to get  the reading (capacitance and D value). Then LCR’s frequency was set 100Hz. Then  same procedures were followed for each dielectric sample to get the reading for  all frequency.02br02br00please help me 02br00how to improve above paragraph. and any correction ?0-

Mr Wordy · Accepted Answer

1i01b00The02b00 LCR meter’s terminals were connected with 01del~~00Copper (Cu)02del~~00 01b00a copper02b00 connector to get 01del~~00the Zero02del~~00 01b00zero02b00 capacitance.02i02br
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00The purpose of this step is not clear (to me). Are you calibrating the meter or something? Did you remove this connection before testing the samples?02br
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01i00That capacitance made from the interior parts of the LCR meter. 02i02br
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00This sentence is ungrammatical, but again I don't really understand what you're trying to say. "That capacitance" doesn't seem to make sense -- in the previous sentence you said the capacitance was zero, so there isn't any.02br
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01i00Then all capacitor (dielectric) samples were labeled 01del~~00According those name02del~~00. 02i02br
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00"According those name" doesn't mean anything.02br
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01i00Then LCR meter’s frequency was selected (set) according our practical requirement, such as 50 Hz, 100Hz, 1000Hz, up to 5000000Hz.Then initial LCR’s frequency was set 50 Hz. then dielectric sample was installed in to the device. Then readings (capacitance and D value) were taken from the LCR meter display. 02i00Same procedures were followed for each dielectric sample to get the reading (capacitance and D value). Then LCR’s frequency was set 100Hz. Then same procedures were followed for each dielectric sample to get the reading for all frequency.02br
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00You're missing the word "the" several places, but the whole thing seems a bit rambling, and the "then ... then ... then" style doesn't read well. How about:02br
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01i00The LCR meter's frequency was initially set to 50 Hz, and the first dielectric sample was installed in the device. Readings (capacitance and D value) were taken from the LCR meter display. This procedure was repeated for each sample. Further sets of readings were then taken with the LCR's frequency set to 100 Hz, 1 kHz, and various other values up to 5 MHz.02i02br
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00The word "installed" could be fine, but it suggests a more complicated procedure than just a quick connection of wires. (But if there's an "installation" procedure for each sample, then I don't understand why you would test all samples at the first frequency, then all samples at the second frequency, and so on. You're just multiplying the "installation" effort. If it was me then I'd test the first sample at all frequencies, then the second sample at all frequencies, and so on.)02br
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00I'm also not sure whether this "device" is supposed to be the meter itself or something else. If the former then do you really "install" things into the meter? If the latter then is the nature of this "device" explained elsewhere? 0-

Nithila · Answer

0i'm satisfied about you corrections.02br
00Thanks a lot Mr wordy0-

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