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I am suppose to write a business memo to my employees about the summer dress code.

Greetings, Sony Classic Group staff! Now that summer is here, we have made the decision to allow casual business attire. However, we want our employees to wear casual business attire that reflects professionalism. Our employees will work in a comfortable but professional environment, an environment that represents our respectable company.

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Anonymous I am supposed to write a business memo to my employees about the summer dress code.

Greetings, Sony Classic Group staff! Now that summer is here, we have made the decision to allow casual business attire. However, we want our employees to wear casual business attire that reflects professionalism. Our employees will work in a comfortable but professional environment, an environment that represents our respectable company.

Hi Anon;

I'm curious - what is your winter dress code? Do your employees presently work in an uncomfortable environment?

You should inform your employees in your memo what you mean by "casual business attire." Your memo repeats a lot of words, but does not explain what they mean.

This article may be useful: http://smallbusiness.chron.com/write-dress-code-memo-31461.html

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