Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
dimi76
1 font 00 Hello, I'm Dimi from Bulgaria 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 My level of English is far from advanced. 02 br
00 I would be very grateful, if someone can give me some comments on my review. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 The task: Your college magazine has asked you to write a review of two magazines or newspapers that appeal to different kinds of readers. Say in what ways they are different and what makes them popular with their readers, giving your personal views about the publications. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Do you want interesting informative articles or objective reports, wide coverage of the news or the latest headlines? Then take a look at the Trud and the Standart Newspapers. 02 font 02 br
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00 The Trud Newspaper is issued only once a week, but it provides a great amount of news. Its focus is mainly on the world news and the latest headlines. However, it also contains information about sport events and entertainment. The Trud newspaper provides objective, truthful journalism on the stories that affect all of us. It stands up to political correctness. The news coverage is fair and rational. All this makes the newspaper appeal to its readers, most of them – middle aged men. 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 Unlike the Trud, the Standart Newspaper is published daily and it offers more detailed and in-depth articles ranging from show-business interviews to more political and sport issues. The style of the newspaper is a little too verbose, but the quality of pictures and supplements is better than the Trud. 02 br
00 In comparison with the Trud, the Standart is more expensive and it is more popular among young people - 20 – 30 years old. Its huge popularity is achieved mostly through its thoughtful and well-written style. 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 The Standart Newspaper is better if you are interested in more extensive coverage of the news. But if you want impartial, intelligent journalism, then the Trud Newspaper is for you. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 My level of English is far from advanced. 02 br
00 I would be very grateful, if someone can give me some comments on my review. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 The task: Your college magazine has asked you to write a review of two magazines or newspapers that appeal to different kinds of readers. Say in what ways they are different and what makes them popular with their readers, giving your personal views about the publications. 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 Do you want interesting informative articles or objective reports, wide coverage of the news or the latest headlines? Then take a look at the Trud and the Standart Newspapers. 02 font 02 br
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00 The Trud Newspaper is issued only once a week, but it provides a great amount of news. Its focus is mainly on the world news and the latest headlines. However, it also contains information about sport events and entertainment. The Trud newspaper provides objective, truthful journalism on the stories that affect all of us. It stands up to political correctness. The news coverage is fair and rational. All this makes the newspaper appeal to its readers, most of them – middle aged men. 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 Unlike the Trud, the Standart Newspaper is published daily and it offers more detailed and in-depth articles ranging from show-business interviews to more political and sport issues. The style of the newspaper is a little too verbose, but the quality of pictures and supplements is better than the Trud. 02 br
00 In comparison with the Trud, the Standart is more expensive and it is more popular among young people - 20 – 30 years old. Its huge popularity is achieved mostly through its thoughtful and well-written style. 02 font 02 br
01 font 00 The Standart Newspaper is better if you are interested in more extensive coverage of the news. But if you want impartial, intelligent journalism, then the Trud Newspaper is for you. 02 font 02 br
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Top answer
02 br 02 br 00 I'm not sure of the meaning of 'It stands up to political correctness'. 02 br 02 br 00 Also you could maybe re-work the parts where you define the average readers. 0-
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0 I think you've done well on this task. 02 br
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00 I'm not sure of the meaning of 'It stands up to political correctness'. Are you saying that it is opposed to political correctness? 02 br
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00 Also you could maybe re-work the parts where you define the average readers. Look at the punctuation in these parts. 0-
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00 I'm not sure of the meaning of 'It stands up to political correctness'. Are you saying that it is opposed to political correctness? 02 br
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00 Also you could maybe re-work the parts where you define the average readers. Look at the punctuation in these parts. 0-
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