Julius_ Posted 16 years agoEssay & Composition Writing
Dialogue
Hello
I would like to ask you to check this out for errors please:
"Could you stop smoking please? It is not allowed to smoke inside the buildings in Ireland.
Give me a break! Do you want me to go outside? It's freezing cold out there.
I am only asking you politely. I wouldn't really like to be exposed to the smoke from your cigarette.
Stop annoying me, will you? I just want to finish this cigarette and go back to work.
I am sorry, but in these circumstances I feel it is my duty to call the police.
Ok, I am stubbing out the cigarette and I am gone. Are you happy now?
Oh, you really could be less rude to other people. Please next time consider other people before you act."
Thank you