In a Japanese forum for English learning I found a bit complicated question about how to use "despite".
The questioner presented seven sentences as follows: (A1) Although I have a terrible cold, I will go out tonight. (A2) Despite having a terrible cold, I will go out tonight. (A3) Despite a terrible cold, I will go out tonight. (B1) Although he was a club member, he could not get in. (B2) Although a club member, he could not get in. (B3) Despite being a club member, he could not get in. (B4) Despite a club member, he could not get in. The questioner said that all the sentences (A1) to (B3) sound OK, but he/she feels some oddness in (B4). And what he/she is seeking is the reason why (B4) sounds weird despite the fact (A3) sounds OK.
I myself feel (B4) is odd but I can't explain the reason. Could you help me?
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IT doesn't quite match the other sentences, so it looks odd. IT does actually have a sensible meaning, but not that which is intended! I'll try to explain.
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IT doesn't quite match the other sentences, so it looks odd. IT does actually have a sensible meaning, but not that which is intended! I'll try to explain.
A terrible cold - from the context it is clear that this is the disease, rather than cold weather, or a cold 'something'. It is clear that the cold itself is the thing causing a problem - therefore despite (having) a cold.
"Despite a club member, he could not get in" is someway ambiguous about what "despite a club member" exactly means. The sentence could be interpreted two ways: (1) Despite his club membership, he could not get in. (2) Despite the fact some club member recommended him, he could not get in. The problem would not be
We posted at the same time. Anyway thank you for your explanation. I feel it seems almost the same as that I answered to the questioner. This time I learned "despite" is a word that needs a logical clarity when it is used. Thank you again.