Cycle sport

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Cycle sport is physical activity using bicycles and it’s a great way to exercise and enjoying doing activities with friends. Also, you can also kick off your challenge by doing competitions which require you to cycle around 100-120 kilometers.

The downside is the price of the gears. It can be expensive if you buy a carbon bicycle, jersey and shoes but it will worth it whether you use it a lot or not. Also, it’s customary to wake up at 6 o’clock to go outside and cycle. Morning are always better because you have less traffic on the road and the weather is colder.

To sum up, I believe cycling are great to challenge yourself and enjoy time with friends. Focus, passion and hard working embodies all of these qualities in this sport.

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Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Hello, pob944—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.

The main problem is that your essay is too short and too informal. What you have written, however, does not need much correction:

Cycle sport is physical activity using bicycles. It is an effective way to exercise and enjoy other activities with friends. You can also also challenge yourself by entering competitions which require you to cycle around 100-120 kilometers.

The disadvantage is the price of the gear, which can be expensive if you buy a carbon bicycle, a jersey and shoes. However, it is worth the expense whether you use the bicycle a lot or not. Also, it is customary to wake up at 6 o’clock to cycle. Mornings are always better because there is less traffic and the weather is cooler.

To sum up, cycling is great to challenge yourself and enjoy time with friends. Focus, passion and hard work are all embodied in this sport.

Pob944 · Answer

I know my text is too informal but I prefer to write a short text before writing longer. It's easier to correct and improve my skills.

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