Autominus Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Cover letter - please I need your help
Dear friends,
Could anybody check and correct my cover letter?
Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?
Please this is so important.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom. I am currently at the stage of looking for a job, and I am open to a wide variety of options. With the enclosed resume, I would like to introduce you to my qualifications and experience and acquaint you with the considerable skills which I have to offer. I believe that my skills and strengths are an excellent match for your company profile.
I am a talented IT professional with extensive experience in the areas of network and systems administration, network infrastructure design, and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services. On the other hand I have a variety of leadership, communications, motivational, team building, and analytical skills. I enjoy helping and inspiring diverse groups to work towards a common goal, using my ability to understand, negotiate, and resolve conflicting needs. I have been a vital part of the growth and success of every company for which I have worked, and have played a key role in its development. Now, I would like to bring my knowledge and expertise to your company.
If you can use a self-starter with unlimited initiative, excellent computer science skills, and a talent for solving stubborn problems, please contact me using the contact details in my resume, and I will duly make myself available for a personal meeting at your convenience. I can provide outstanding personal and professional references.
I hope to have the pleasure of talking with you in person soon, and I thank you in advantage for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
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Thank you in advance for your help.
Could anybody check and correct my cover letter?
Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?
Please this is so important.
---
Dear Sir or Madam,
Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom. I am currently at the stage of looking for a job, and I am open to a wide variety of options. With the enclosed resume, I would like to introduce you to my qualifications and experience and acquaint you with the considerable skills which I have to offer. I believe that my skills and strengths are an excellent match for your company profile.
I am a talented IT professional with extensive experience in the areas of network and systems administration, network infrastructure design, and project management. I am particularly interested in network services study, deployment, and administration in a free and open-source software based environment. I am always looking for new ways to automate and improve existing services. On the other hand I have a variety of leadership, communications, motivational, team building, and analytical skills. I enjoy helping and inspiring diverse groups to work towards a common goal, using my ability to understand, negotiate, and resolve conflicting needs. I have been a vital part of the growth and success of every company for which I have worked, and have played a key role in its development. Now, I would like to bring my knowledge and expertise to your company.
If you can use a self-starter with unlimited initiative, excellent computer science skills, and a talent for solving stubborn problems, please contact me using the contact details in my resume, and I will duly make myself available for a personal meeting at your convenience. I can provide outstanding personal and professional references.
I hope to have the pleasure of talking with you in person soon, and I thank you in advantage for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
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Thank you in advance for your help.
Top answer
autominus Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom . Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to the United Kingdom. autominus With the enclosed resume In American English.
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autominusPlease excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom.Please excuse the impersonal appearance of this letter, but I have just now relocated permanently to the United Kingdom.
autominusWith the enclosed
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I just have time to offer a few general comments on your first sentence.
. . . the impersonal appearance of this letter What do you mean?
. . . but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom.
I don't understand the logical connection to impersonality.
. . . the impersonal appearance of this letter What do you mean?
. . . but I have just now relocated permanently to United Kingdom.
I don't understand the logical connection to impersonality.
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To
The Secretery & Correspondent of
Ideal college art's & sciences,
kakinada,
Sub:- Requesting You to Issue me, my Original and provisional Certificate
Respected Mam,
I am Naresh Bommidi, I was student of your college. I have done my Msc computer science(pg) bearing roll no :413258521008. from your college session 2013-2015,in your college.
The Secretery & Correspondent of
Ideal college art's & sciences,
kakinada,
Sub:- Requesting You to Issue me, my Original and provisional Certificate
Respected Mam,
I am Naresh Bommidi, I was student of your college. I have done my Msc computer science(pg) bearing roll no :413258521008. from your college session 2013-2015,in your college.
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