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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please help me out?

Dear Teacher,

Could you please review the below paragraph and pls advise if it's error free.

Human Resources executive with over 5 years of comprehensive human resources experience who is highly motivated to contribute to a company's HR division, and to work in a dynamic organization by making an effective and result oriented contribution of my potential, knowledge and experience with excellence and professionalism; Combines strong administrative, organizational and communication skills with expertise in:

  • Recruitment & Employment
  • Training & Development
  • Employee Relations
  • Organization Development
  • Personnel Training/Supervision
  • Policy & Procedure Development
  • Strategic & Succession Planning
  • Team/Leadership& Management
  • Project Planning, Staffing & Management
  • Benefits & Compensation
  • Performance Management & Appraisal Processes
  • Competency & Skills Assessment
  

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Hi I must appreciate your english. It was a good paragraph. I doubt if it is about a job recruitment ad.

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Hi

I must appreciate your english. It was a good paragraph.

I doubt if it is about a job recruitment ad. If it is an advertisement about a vacant job then the passage is as below:

Human Resources executive with over 5 years of comprehensive human resources experience, who is highly motivated to contribute to a company's HR division, and to work in a dynamic organization
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AnonymousDear Teacher,

Could you please review the below paragraph and pls advise if it's error free.

Human Resources executive with over 5 years of comprehensive human resources experience who is highly motivated to contr
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