Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you please check my opinion? : )
Q. Some tourist prefer to travel by themselves rather than with a tour group. Others would rather travel in a group led by a tour guide.
Which do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Answer
I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.
The first reason is that I don't have to be bound by a schedule. I would like to go where I would like to go ,but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to museum, I would have to go there, but I don't like going to museum because it's boring for me.
The second reason is that/Second, I would like to enjoy spending time as much as I would like, but if I am in a tour group, I would have to move from one place to another without enough break. Even though I feel tired.
For such reasons, I prefer traveling by myself/alone to traveling with a tour group.
p.s. /<<this mark, I would like to know which one is correct or both ok.
Which do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Answer
I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.
The first reason is that I don't have to be bound by a schedule. I would like to go where I would like to go ,but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to museum, I would have to go there, but I don't like going to museum because it's boring for me.
The second reason is that/Second, I would like to enjoy spending time as much as I would like, but if I am in a tour group, I would have to move from one place to another without enough break. Even though I feel tired.
For such reasons, I prefer traveling by myself/alone to traveling with a tour group.
p.s. /<<this mark, I would like to know which one is correct or both ok.
Top answer
I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group. The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule. I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule.
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I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.
The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule. I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to a museum, I will have to go there, even if it is boring for me.
The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule. I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to a museum, I will have to go there, even if it is boring for me.
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