Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
could you look to my introduction and make notes
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00 I have to write an essay about the ways of resistance especialy the boycutt campaign, and I would like to let you read the introducation of my essay in order to let you check the grammar, make notes to improve and make it interesting. 02 br
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00 In the course of time the resistance against occupation is right to all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the meaning of resistance has been changed from resistance with weapons to many different ways such as the civil-disobedience, stop dealing with occupation and boycott campaign. There are many countries attempted to use all ways that they can use in order to get the freedom. India, South Africa and Algeria were the best evidence that show us the different ways of resistance. Furthermore, in this essay we would like to try to compare the boycott campaign in Palestine with other countries who used and succeed in it. Also, we would try to reach the point of the importance of the boycott campaign. 0-
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00 I have to write an essay about the ways of resistance especialy the boycutt campaign, and I would like to let you read the introducation of my essay in order to let you check the grammar, make notes to improve and make it interesting. 02 br
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00 In the course of time the resistance against occupation is right to all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the meaning of resistance has been changed from resistance with weapons to many different ways such as the civil-disobedience, stop dealing with occupation and boycott campaign. There are many countries attempted to use all ways that they can use in order to get the freedom. India, South Africa and Algeria were the best evidence that show us the different ways of resistance. Furthermore, in this essay we would like to try to compare the boycott campaign in Palestine with other countries who used and succeed in it. Also, we would try to reach the point of the importance of the boycott campaign. 0-
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0 Hi Rame2000sat, 02 br 02 br 00 Here is your intro tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful to you. - Nick 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 At all times 02 b 00 01 b 00 resistance 02 b 00 against occupation is 01 b 00 considered justified 02 b 00 01 b 00 by 02 b 00 all people who are occupied.
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0 Hi Rame2000sat, 02 br
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00 Here is your intro tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful to you. - Nick 02 br
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01 b 00 At all times 02 b 00 01 b 00 resistance 02 b 00 against occupation is 01 b 00 considered justified 02 b 00 01 b 00 by 02 b 00 all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the 0
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00 Here is your intro tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful to you. - Nick 02 br
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01 b 00 At all times 02 b 00 01 b 00 resistance 02 b 00 against occupation is 01 b 00 considered justified 02 b 00 01 b 00 by 02 b 00 all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the 0
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0 thanks alot Nick147. 02 br
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00 The notes that you added made my introduction more attractive for reader. 0-
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00 The notes that you added made my introduction more attractive for reader. 0-
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