Could you help me to make my motivation letter better?

Hello, I am now applying for a guide in the study trip The job is more or less like a interpreter or a guider, to help the foreign students to buy some tickets ,to introduce some places of interests.I have written somethings, but this is my first time to write the motivation letter, so please help me.The following is my motivation letter, could you guys help me correct it or give me some advices to strengthen and polish this motivation letter?Thanks a lot

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Dear sir/madam

I am writing to show my interest in applying for a guide in the study trip to AAA. I am attracted by this great chance, which is not only the wonderful chance to enrich my social experiences but also a terrific chance to show nowadays’ AAA to BBB. I believe such an experience will surely help me to pursue my goal of becoming a responsible and innovative international engineer and contributing to ABCD outstanding record as a cradle of great engineers.

I have been living in AAA for almost 20 years, I know AAA very well, especially CCC and DDD. Since my parents run a small company in CCC, I had the experiences to guide the customers to the places of interests many times. I think these experiences of guiding will make me more suitable for the guide in study trip. And in the freshman year I used to be the life secretary. During that year, I gathered some experiences on how to help others with the general life affairs, such as transportations, accommodations etc. And I think this also enables me to provide a good insight into AAA for BBB students. My past experience as a volunteer in 2008 Olympics made it necessary for me to focus on providing quality service and also enable me to manage some affairs between different countries as well.

English is essential for every international student, so I think my English is quite enough for the daily communications and of course for my study. Now there is almost half year away from that holiday, I will spare no effort to complete myself to be a successful guide in this half year. I am now not the guy who can give a terrific speech with some advanced words, but I believe I am the one who is ready and has the ability to help the BBB students to learn AAA.





I firmly believe I have the ability to provide the best guide service for the BBB students with my passion and totally sincerity in AAA.

Thanks for your time and your consideration. I am really looking forward for a further interview from you.





Yours Sincerely

Daisy

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