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1b00Nowadays, radio is being replaced by TV and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea.02b02br
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00Although TV and the internet are very popular and useful nowadays, radio is still useful and can not be replaced. Wherever you are, whenever it is, whatever you are doing, you can easily listen to radio.02br
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00Actually, radio is so convenient. It is easy to listen to radio while doing other things. An example, you can not watch TV or use the internet when you are driving or cooking. But you would like to update news, to listen to some hits of music; radio would be your choice.02br
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00Moreover, radio is very cheap and easy to use. Unfortunately, useful information technologies, such as television and internet, are till luxurious things to poor areas which are widely in the world. Radio is an appropriate choice.02br
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00Especially, no matter your place, no matter your time, you can easily update any information with a radio. You are very busy, you can not spend time to sit front of TV or computer, listen to radio, and it provides you many interesting programs all the time. Even though you live in a remote region without internet and television, you would not be left behind if you have a radio. I am living a modern city; I have TV and use internet everyday. But I usually listen to radio, I like it.02br
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00In order to update information people nowadays have many choices. Watching TV and accessing the internet are very popular ways, but radio can not be replaced, it is still a important way, a rich information source.0-