UMUTEJDER Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you correct the mistakes in writing please ? Thank you : )
ENTREPRENEURSHIP LESSON
Entrepreneurship is learned in life.We can just learn to precodures
and associations which provides support in the school.
To be a successful entrepreneur ,We need to be opportunistic and
have networking.
In addition,to have leadership feature contributes us in this
process.
More specifically,there was no any tourism newspaper in the city
where I live in previous years.
I realized this opportunity and I had attempted to publish a new
tourism newspaper.
One onether example,You have a product to sell.But you couldn't
market it in your country.
You can market your product in consumer market of other countries.
In this context,you must be brave to take risk.
At the same time,Feasibility study and researching market are
necessary to being successful of companies.
Good luck to you all.Kind regards.
Entrepreneurship is learned in life.We can just learn to precodures
and associations which provides support in the school.
To be a successful entrepreneur ,We need to be opportunistic and
have networking.
In addition,to have leadership feature contributes us in this
process.
More specifically,there was no any tourism newspaper in the city
where I live in previous years.
I realized this opportunity and I had attempted to publish a new
tourism newspaper.
One onether example,You have a product to sell.But you couldn't
market it in your country.
You can market your product in consumer market of other countries.
In this context,you must be brave to take risk.
At the same time,Feasibility study and researching market are
necessary to being successful of companies.
Good luck to you all.Kind regards.
Top answer
I have underlined problem areas in your text and struck out unneeded words. Please correct them and post your revised version here. We can just learn to precodures and associations which provides s upport in the school .
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I have underlined problem areas in your text and struck out unneeded words. Please correct them and post your revised version here.
ENTREPRENEURSHIP LESSON
Entrepreneurship is learned in life.We canjust learn to precodures and associations which provides support in the school. To be a successful entrepreneur ,We need to be opportun
ENTREPRENEURSHIP LESSON
Entrepreneurship is learned in life.We can
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