could someone please check =)

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1) Uplift the spirit of volunteerism by implementing a one-week social awareness program on the activities calendar.

2) Confront the concerns of the students by maximizing the Student Forums as a venue for the students’ holistic growth. Focus on social and personal development shall be discussed.

3) Design a Leadership Training Program that will tackle courses that incorporate a clear approach to developing leadership skills for organization leaders and students as well.

4) Plan a synchronized Departmental Outreach Program to fully maximize human resources.

5) Organize a Music Ministry to perform during Eucharistic celebrations.

6) Organize a Volunteers Unit that would engage in special activities and community development.

Initiate the formation of the Student Council Federation composed mainly of colleges in Rizal.

Expand the sports program through Campus Open and formulation of sports clubs and organizations.

Execute the Sportsfest event with a wider scope of activities and program.

Appointment of moderators for every student organization to assist in conceptualization of activities and to ensure proper planning, organizing, implementation, and evaluation of activities.

Implement a Point-System Criterion for every activity initiated by an organization to recognize outstanding clubs and organizations.

Student Council and respective organization heads are tasked to coordinate with Department Chairpersons/ professors to include more practical, out-of-the classroom & field experiences for the students.

Vice-President for Academics is tasked to coordinate with the student body with regard to student concerns in curricular and co-curricular programs.

Inchoateknowledge · Accepted Answer

is it called a formal discourse:)

it is a profusely embellished language you used. for me it was very educating.
i would not say to formulate a sports club, tough.
i usually formulate an idea, physical formulae...., but definitely not sports centres.
"appointment of moderators...." - where is the predicate in the sentence?
otherwise impeccable.
was it you who composed the essay?
i just wonder what level it amounts to.

r u a native or a learner?

inchoate

Anonymous · Answer

I must make a presentaion about Vancouver... Can Someone check the text please??

Why I choose Vancouver

Last Christmas I stayed in Vancouver for 2 weeks. I love the city and the Vancouverits.

The buldings have a great architecture and the people are very friendly and open-minded.

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This is a Skylin-picture of Vancouver from the Standly Park, I will tell you later something about this park.
In the background of Vancouver are the Mountains with snow and on the other side is the sea. I love the beautiful mix between the city and the environment

Index

Why I choose Vancouver I said.

Now I will tell about the Facts of Vancouver

The Clima

Demographics

And for the End I will tell you something about some Objekt of Interest, wich I like.

facts

The City of Vancouver was incorporated on April 6, 1886.

Vancouver is a Canadian city in the province of British Columbia.

It is the largest metropolitan centre in western Canada and the third largest in the country.

The city's population is 2,186,965 but without the metropolitan area only 545,671.

Vancouver has an area of 114.67 km² and a metropolitan area of 2‘878.52

Vancouver is in in the Pacific Time Zone (UTC). They are eight hours back MET .

Clima

Many people think Canada is very very cold, this is generally true, but not Vancouver.
Vancouvers ’climate is unusually temperate (was meinst Du hier? Es hat kei typisches Kanadisches Klima) by Canadian standards; after Victoria (this is of on Vancouver island, we see the island in the pictures bevor) it is the second warmest major city in Canada during the winter. Its only a few averages under null.
Summer months are generally sunny and dry, with moderate temperatures. The daily maximum averages is 22°C in July and August
A wide range of plant species, including many exotics, can be found growing in Vancouver thanks to the mild climate

Demographics

Vancouver is home to people of many ethnic backgrounds and religions. Chinese are by far, the largest visible ethnic minority group in the city.
Vancouver contains the second-largest Chinatown in North America (after San Francisco Chinatown). There are also many multicultural neighbourhoods such as the Punjabi Market, Little Italy, Greektown, Japantown, Commercial Drive, and a series of Koreatowns.

Sights Down Town

This is the commercial heart of the city, where office towers, shopping centres and hotel.

In the Picture left you see the Harbour Centre Tower. From the tower provides a stunning 360-degree view of the city and the metropolitain

In the Picture other pictures you see the robson street.

Stanley Park

Stanley Park is a 4 km² (1 000 acres) park.

These trees can be up to 100 metres (300 ft) tall and, hundreds of years old.

It is the third largest park in north America

8 million people visit the park yearly

Gastown

Gastown ist the birthplace of this city. Most of the major events that have occurred since Vancouver's story began, happened in or within blocks of Gastown.

In Gastown you can see the only Steam Clock in the word.
Granville

In the picture here you see the Main Entrance Granville Island.

Granville Island is like a little City. With Small shop, restaurants etc.

The http://www.gi.iondesign.ca/ is the main hous, where you can go shopping for all kinds of handmade arts and crafts (also, food, if you're into that kind of thing).

From Granville you have a beautiful look to the Skyline of Vancouver, in the background you see also the mointains.

Dante · Answer

hey! well these are my fundamental plans for the coming school year. im a student affairs director in a school here in the philippines. im not a native speaker. im still trying to learn a lot of things and pretty much concerned with my english (prepositions in particular) =)

could someone please check =)

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