Chrismlangan Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Could someone fix this sentence?
Their only light sources are a small nightlight and the ceiling, which is a mirage of glowing stars, planets, and galaxies.
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Hi, Their only light sources are a small nightlight and the ceiling, which is a mirage of glowing stars, planets, and galaxies. This does not make sense. Do you mean 'sky' rather than 'ceiling'?
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Hi,
Their only light sources are a small nightlight and the ceiling, which is a mirage of glowing stars, planets, and galaxies.
This does not make sense. Do you mean 'sky' rather than 'ceiling'? Even then, it's a very fancy and unrealistic description of the night sky.
Best wishes, Clive
Their only light sources are a small nightlight and the ceiling, which is a mirage of glowing stars, planets, and galaxies.
This does not make sense. Do you mean 'sky' rather than 'ceiling'? Even then, it's a very fancy and unrealistic description of the night sky.
Best wishes, Clive
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Is the ceiling of the room covered with luminous facsimiles of stars and so on? "Mirage" would be the wrong word whatever it is .
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