Mikul Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
could someone correct this, please?
It's a short introduction about me
My name is xxx(32) and I am currently living in xxx at xxx Street, number 828. I moved to The Netherlands in 2011, due to the severe economic crisis emerged in Spain seven-year now, in pursuance of prosperous future. Holding a Bachelor’s Degree in Market Research and Techniques, and it was always my big desire to complete my academic background with a Master’s Program that matches my future work ambitions. I am experienced in such different fields like hospitality industry, financial and research, although I wish to develop my professional career in the last of them where I discovered my real vocation. On this line, the recognized xxx master’s program offers me the possibility to combine my two big passions; becoming a qualified researcher and working in the humanitarian relief field.
My name is xxx(32) and I am currently living in xxx at xxx Street, number 828. I moved to The Netherlands in 2011, due to the severe economic crisis emerged in Spain seven-year now, in pursuance of prosperous future. Holding a Bachelor’s Degree in Market Research and Techniques, and it was always my big desire to complete my academic background with a Master’s Program that matches my future work ambitions. I am experienced in such different fields like hospitality industry, financial and research, although I wish to develop my professional career in the last of them where I discovered my real vocation. On this line, the recognized xxx master’s program offers me the possibility to combine my two big passions; becoming a qualified researcher and working in the humanitarian relief field.
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My name is *** (32) . I'm 32 years old and I am currently living in *** at *** Street, number 828. I moved to The Netherlands in 2011, due to the severe economic crisis which emerged in Spain seven years ago seven-year now , in pursuance of a prosperous future.
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My name is ***(32). I'm 32 years old and I am currently living in *** at *** Street, number 828. I moved to The Netherlands in 2011, due to the severe economic crisis which emerged in Spain seven years ago seven-year now, in pursuance of a prosperous future. Holding I have a bachelor’s degree in Market Research and T
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Thanks for the improvement! I'll take it in account
Have a nice day buddy
Have a nice day buddy
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