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Today I’m going to tell you something about Kim Jong-un. Kim Jong-un, also called the great succeder, is the current leader of North Korea . With an age of 29, he is the world’s youngest head of the state . He is the son of Kim Jong-il, also called the great leader and the grandson of Kim il Sung, who is also called the eternal leader. As you can see, the North Korean love nicknames. Kim Jong-Un is the third son and youngest son of Kim Jong-il, but he’d become the leader because the first son was caught attempting to enter Japan with a fake passport to visit Disneyland and his second son was too feminine in character. Kim Jong-Un is however said to be exactly like his father, but there are some differences. Kim Jong-Un went to school in Switzerland and has a very western lifestyle. He smokes, loves Johnny Walker wiskey and he is also a big fan of NBA basketball.