Uroczyalezajety Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Could somebody check my writing? please :D
Hi Brian,
I’m writing to tell you what happened last weekend. It was the most stressful experience I’d ever had.
I had a party and I had to look great. I should have worn the best clothes but everything was in laundry and I needed borrow something from my father. I thought nobody would learn about it and I took his red shirt without his permission and I was going to the party.
Everything would be good, if my friend didn’t mess my shirt a beer. I was angry at him but I hadn’t time for fighting and I come back to home. My father was waiting at me and he was disappointed. I tried to explain but he didn’t want to hear me. He told me I should have asked him because not everything is mine.
Next day, I went to the shop and I bought him a new shirt and I gave it after dinner. He cracked a smile for the first time in day and he forgave me.
That’s all for now. I hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
XYZ
I’m writing to tell you what happened last weekend. It was the most stressful experience I’d ever had.
I had a party and I had to look great. I should have worn the best clothes but everything was in laundry and I needed borrow something from my father. I thought nobody would learn about it and I took his red shirt without his permission and I was going to the party.
Everything would be good, if my friend didn’t mess my shirt a beer. I was angry at him but I hadn’t time for fighting and I come back to home. My father was waiting at me and he was disappointed. I tried to explain but he didn’t want to hear me. He told me I should have asked him because not everything is mine.
Next day, I went to the shop and I bought him a new shirt and I gave it after dinner. He cracked a smile for the first time in day and he forgave me.
That’s all for now. I hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
XYZ
Top answer
Hi Brian, I’m writing to tell you what happened last weekend. It was the most stressful experience I’d ever had. I had a party and I had to look great.
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Hi Brian,
I’m writing to tell you what happened last weekend. It was the most stressful experience I’d ever had.
I had a party and I had to look great. I should have worn my best clothes but everything was in the laundry and (so?) I needed to borrow something from my father. I thought nobody would learn (find out) about it and I took his red shirt without
I’m writing to tell you what happened last weekend. It was the most stressful experience I’d ever had.
I had a party and I had to look great. I should have worn my best clothes but everything was in the laundry and (so?) I needed to borrow something from my father. I thought nobody would learn (find out) about it and I took his red shirt without
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