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Faisal_s Posted 20 years ago

Could pls somebody help me LIMERICK!!!!

heey,
Could some correct it for me, and perhaps make a proper sentence for the last line of the limerick....? plss, answer soon very importan

There was an old good man from Leeds.
Who was known as the great Mr Deeds.
he wore a big fluffy a hat.
which made him look fat.
also he had very special needs.
  

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There was an old man from Leeds. Who was known as the great Mr Deeds. he wore a big hat.

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There was an old man from Leeds.
Who was known as the great Mr Deeds.
he wore a big hat.
which made him look fat.


The last line doesn't really work. It needs to be a pun or a joke not just another line of description.
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im out of jokes or puns however u call it
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i was counting on a bit of help:P
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0Need to get the rhythm right and ban as many boring words as possible:02br
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00There was an old person from Leeds,02br
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00Where they called him the Great Mr Deeds;02br
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00A big fluffy hat02br
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00Made him look rather fat,02br
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00But his legs were as lean as two reeds.0-