Mohammad Lardhi Posted 14 years ago
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Could anyone spot mistakes in this paragraph, please?
I have just phoned but unfortunately the representative to whom I talked couldn't satisfied me. so I am repeating my call again hoping to assist me to explain this something I noticed [is] most strange. I have purchased a recharging card from some shop, however, It was a piece of paper and not plastic card like which I was used to purchasing. On the other hand, I didn't notice any serial number of the side of this piece of paper.
I haven't used it yet, though, I am quite scared that it was used.
On top of that, and aside from the strangeness of the card, I didn't notice any scratching area covering the hidden numbers, however, the numbers of recharging are shown. So I am scared that the owner of shop from whom I purchased the card might use it. thus I need confirming this for me.
If these representatives are authorised from you, otherwise they maybe want to be falsifying your reputation.
I haven't used it yet, though, I am quite scared that it was used.
On top of that, and aside from the strangeness of the card, I didn't notice any scratching area covering the hidden numbers, however, the numbers of recharging are shown. So I am scared that the owner of shop from whom I purchased the card might use it. thus I need confirming this for me.
If these representatives are authorised from you, otherwise they maybe want to be falsifying your reputation.
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I just phoned your representative, but unfortunately he was unable to satisfy my concern so I am writing in the hope that you will be able to assist me in explaining something very strange that I noticed. I purchased a recharging card from a shop, but it was a piece of paper, and not a plastic card like those I am used to seeing. Also, I didn't notice any serial number on the paper.
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I just phoned your representative, but unfortunately he was unable to satisfy my concern so I am writing in the hope that you will be able to assist me in explaining something very strange that I noticed.
I purchased a recharging card from a shop, but it was a piece of paper, and not a plastic card like those I am used to seeing. Also, I didn't notice any serial number on the paper. Alt
I purchased a recharging card from a shop, but it was a piece of paper, and not a plastic card like those I am used to seeing. Also, I didn't notice any serial number on the paper. Alt
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