Could anyone check my letter of motivation

To whom it may concern,
My name is ___, I have obtained my Bachelor Degree in Computer Systems Engineering major at_____University, I wish to increase my knowledge and skills in an international environment. I believe that I could make significant contributions to my community by participating in the Erasmus Mundus Programme.
“The expert at anything was once a beginner”. In a few years, I can see myself as a creative professional in the technology field. Technology touches almost everything we use; it has created change and continues to create change.
I’m really interested to join HCI (human-computer interaction) master program, where cognitive psychology meets computer science. During my studies, I have found that my interests are focused particularly in the area of computer- based technologies and how they are appealing, usable, and useful for people. My graduation project titled “Web Controlled Robot” had for its purpose to create a robot vehicle for children, an educational toy designed as a way of learning physical computing.
I am a hard working, reliable individual together with being always eager to learn from new colleagues and take on new challenges. I want to gain valuable experiences, insights, and resources that will enhance my career prospects.
With these reasons mentioned I’m giving a try for myself to be part of this top-quality study program. Not only I will have the chance to travel, but also I will practice my spoken English and watch how people live, observe their traditions, spotting similarities and overcoming differences, trying to build long-term relationships that will last for a lifetime. The entire experience abroad will change my life, as a part of a foreign culture and its higher education system. I would be honored if you decide to accept my candidateship to be student at Uppsala University.
Yours Sincerely,

if there's something I can add to make it consistent?