Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Could anybody correct my speaking?
Could anybody correct my speaking?
Doctor: Could you tell me more about your injury?
Victory:I started pratising yoga at the end of two years before and have been practising it for two months.Then I suffered from exercise injuries. After resting for six months, I found my injuries recovered. However, after practising it for one month my old injuries happened again. Having been resting for one year, I found my injury recovered again and started practising it very carefully. But I suffered from seizure of it once again.It has been one year, since the last time I practised yoga. Nevertheless, I still feel uncomfortable on my knee when I am jumping, climbing up or down stairs or jogging.
Is there any ways that I can write less the phrase of "seizure of exercise injuries"?
Many Thanks in Advance
Victory Ong
Doctor: Could you tell me more about your injury?
Victory:I started pratising yoga at the end of two years before and have been practising it for two months.Then I suffered from exercise injuries. After resting for six months, I found my injuries recovered. However, after practising it for one month my old injuries happened again. Having been resting for one year, I found my injury recovered again and started practising it very carefully. But I suffered from seizure of it once again.It has been one year, since the last time I practised yoga. Nevertheless, I still feel uncomfortable on my knee when I am jumping, climbing up or down stairs or jogging.
Is there any ways that I can write less the phrase of "seizure of exercise injuries"?
Many Thanks in Advance
Victory Ong
Top answer
Your time references are a big mess, Victory. I simply cannot figure out when you started originally, when you stopped, when your resumed your yoga practice. Please rewrite the entire passage.
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Your time references are a big mess, Victory. I simply cannot figure out when you started originally, when you stopped, when your resumed your yoga practice. Please rewrite the entire passage.
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