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Thanks a lot for your prompt response. I feel honored you acceded to supervise me. I already contacted to my prior thesis supervisor for providing recommendation letter and he agreed to give this. I believe he will give a good recommendation since he got a positive impression on me, at least as far I understood. I am thinking to take other recommendation letter from my bachelor teacher.

I will try my best to get into the Public Policy programme. I have diversity in terms of geographic region and job experiences. I have two years of job experiences in both national and multinational corporations in Bangladesh in different sectors. Moreover, I have studied and lived in Norway and Bangladesh. Therefore, I am familiar with the context of Scandinavia and South-Asia. These might give more weight to my candidature.