Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

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6 Answers
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Anyone got comments? All correct?
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As to 5th sentence, I think, we ride a bike but we drive a car/vehicles.
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(a) After a few days, he could finally ride the bicycle by himself.
(b) He was shocked, but/yet happy. He hurriedly thanked his father for the gift.
(c) One afternoon, Peter and his friend, Chan, went to a nearby park.
He finally knew how to ride a bike by himself.
(d) He decided to give Peter a surprise. He secretly bought a new bike for Peter’s birthday gift.
When Peter’s fa
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(c) One day, during the afternoon, Peter and his friend, Chan went to a nearby park.

Why can't I say, "during the afternoon" ?
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Vincent Teo(c) One day, during the afternoon, Peter and his friend, Chan went to a nearby park.

Why can't I say, "during the afternoon" ?
You can. However, "one afternoon" conveys the message just as well, using fewer words.