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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

correction in the letter to Uncle

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00please help me out in correcting the letter which i have drafted to send to my uncle02br
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00Dear uncle02br
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00Greetings to you,02br
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00Thanks for your suggestions. 02br
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00I am working on my English, but now a days i am not getting much time to spend on it, as my semester exams are approaching (scheduled on 19, 21 and 23rd of this month) and on the other hand I have to complete the CII assignment and send them before 2nd of March. 02br
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00In CII I have 10 assignments and I have planed to complete at least 5 before 10 of this month and then i will start studying for my semester exams. Again after my semester( i.e. 23rd Feb ). I will restart CII prepartaion. Before 26th Feb I will complete all the assignments and send to them, as on 27th feb I an going home for 10 days, I will be back on 8th March.02br
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00with warm regards 02br
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00ankur goyal 02br
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00please resplond as soon as possible 02br
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1font 00Dear Ankur, I have tried to correct it as per my knowledge. 02br 02br 00Thanks for your suggestions. 02br 02br 00I am working on my English, but now a days01font 00 I02font 00 am not getting much time to spend on it, as my semester exams are approaching (scheduled on 19, 21 and 23rd of this month) and on the other hand I have to complete the CII assignment and send them before 2nd of March.

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1font00Dear Ankur, I have tried to correct it as per my knowledge. It was almost correct barring some small mistakes.02font02br
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00Dear uncle,02br
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00Greetings to you.02br
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00Thanks for your suggestions. 02br
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00I am working on my English, but now a da
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0Hi. I think it would be better if we say:' but recently I haven't got much time to spend on it' instead of 'but now a days01font00 I02font00 am not getting much time to spend on it'. In my opinion02br
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00'now a days' is not a correct word02br
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00 and we can't use 'have much time' in present progressiv
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0You are right Michelia..thanks.0-
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0dear sir, 02br
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00thanks for your reply 02br
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00could you help me in drafting the same letter in a very descent and formal way0-
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