Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Correction for a short text for my website
Hello, here is a short text which I want to put on my website. Please chcek if it's gramatically and style- correct.
Thanks in advance!
Different things make us happy. I have my own special kind of happiness which has so far mostly occupied only drawers and hard drive folders. Every human being is a kind of transmitter which uniquely captures, processes and transmits a picture of the world around us – my personal storage capacity can’t handle more data any longer... That’s why I’m creating this website – a kind of emotional buffer. Let the positive energy travel far.
Thanks in advance!
Different things make us happy. I have my own special kind of happiness which has so far mostly occupied only drawers and hard drive folders. Every human being is a kind of transmitter which uniquely captures, processes and transmits a picture of the world around us – my personal storage capacity can’t handle more data any longer... That’s why I’m creating this website – a kind of emotional buffer. Let the positive energy travel far.
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Hello, here is a short text which I want to put on my website. Please ch eck if it's gra mm atically correct and stylist ically acceptable. e- correct.
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Hello, here is a short text which I want to put on my website. Please check if it's grammatically correct and stylistically acceptable. e- correct.
Thanks in advance!
Different things make us happy. I have my own special kind of happiness which has so far mostly occupiedonly drawers and hard drive folders. Every human being is a ki
Thanks in advance!
Different things make us happy. I have my own special kind of happiness which has so far mostly occupied
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