Correction - First text ever

I have been in Toronto since June and the main reason is to find a cultural challenge while I improved my English. I enjoy this city so far and I am discovering a new world every day. With my Bachelor in Business I am a suitable candidate in the banking industry but I don’t know if my English level is fine. My strategy to reach my goal is simple I have to write a text and find a way to improve my writing quality and increase my vocabulary.

I believe my background in business and my desire to learn will benefit in the long term run. In the last 2 month period, I can now write a decent text and vocabulary. At this moment, Toronto might be my best choice to start my career while I’m still studying English. I would be great if I had the chance to work with those financial firms while I’ll do my CFA level 1.