Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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hello, i'm trying to translate a sentence, does the following phrase sound good in English? :
"as a result she studied acting under real professsionals in theatrical sphere, and what is more, for 4 yaers has she been playing and learning at an educational theatre, where they made musicals in English."
"as a result she studied acting under real professsionals in theatrical sphere, and what is more, for 4 yaers has she been playing and learning at an educational theatre, where they made musicals in English."
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It's too long and confusing. Divide it into smaller sentences. Maybe...
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It's too long and confusing. Divide it into smaller sentences.
Maybe...
As a result, she studied under real professionals in the theatrical sphere. What's more, she's been playing and learning at an educational theater, where they made musicals in English, for 4 years.
Is that an acceptable alternative?
Maybe...
As a result, she studied under real professionals in the theatrical sphere. What's more, she's been playing and learning at an educational theater, where they made musicals in English, for 4 years.
Is that an acceptable alternative?
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Blue RosesAs a result, she studied [what ?] under real professionals in the theatrical sphere. What's more, she's been playing and learning at an educational theater, where they made musicals in English, for 4 years.This is my 2 cents, from simply reacting to the sound of it.
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Hi,
I don't know what 'an educational theatre' means. Can you say it another way?
Clive
I don't know what 'an educational theatre' means. Can you say it another way?
Clive
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