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Cfvg Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Correct this sentence

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00I will implement XXX project next times, have more traveling when i do it, so i need a laptop to working.02br
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02br 02br 01font 00Dear Sir, 02font 01i 00Don't you know the person's name? It's better to use it. eg 01font 00Dear Mr.

— Clive

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01font00I will implement *** project next times, have more traveling when i do it, so i need a laptop to working.02font02br
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0Dear sir01font01span00,02span02font02br
00I will implement *** project next time. Having much traveling when I am doing it, I need a laptop.02br
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