0Hi,02br 02br 00Please correct this short writing.02br 02br 00Sort of a speech:02br 02br 00Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way. I called for a meeting because, as you have noticed from my prior communication to you all, I feel there are some issues that warrant our immediate attention and they are on how to deal with these:02br 02br 001) Sagging employee morale,02br 02br 002) Frequent thefts of company properties,02br 02br 003) Reverse the rapid employee attrition rate02br 02br 00I would apppreciate it if we could come up with some workable solutions to these issues today at this meeting and believe some minute details of implementation of those solution could be left for discussion at a later meeting.02br 02br 00Now, let us start the meeting. 0-
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0its too long 05002br 02br 00i ve not enough english for this 02br 02br 00"thank you for being here and I am particularly appreciative of fact that some of you came here from a long way"02br 02br 00the above sentence is wrong.02br 02br 00but i think010id1
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0Thank you, Feebs11, for adding the elements of action and immediacy if I interpreted your responding remark correctly.02br 02br 00Thank you too, Saltukhan. I do agree that the sentence you mentioned needs improvement.0-