Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
correct this letter, please.
0 May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping. 02 br
00 For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost. 02 br
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00 Could you please correct this letter? 02 br
00 Thank you. 02 br
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00 For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost. 02 br
02 br
00 Could you please correct this letter? 02 br
00 Thank you. 02 br
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S. 02 br 02 br 00 Could you please correct this letter? 02 font 00 My main comment is that it sounds too formal and fancy.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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01 font 00 May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping. 02 br
00 For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost. 02 br
02 br
00 Could you please correct this letter? 02 font 00 My main comment is that it sounds too formal
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01 font 00 May I request you to send me one copy of your latest catalog by which I can enjoy shopping. 02 br
00 For your convenience, I have remitted the amount U.S. $10.00 to cover catalog cost. 02 br
02 br
00 Could you please correct this letter? 02 font 00 My main comment is that it sounds too formal
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