Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Correct order of words in a sentence
I have 2 issues with the same sentence:
What is exactly the margin that provides an order?
This is a translation from a Dutch sentence.
Context:
Every order consists of several products. Each product has a margin. The total margin of all products in the order is called "order margin".
The real question is:
"how do you know the real/actual margin of an order"
To come back to my sentence:
- is exactly: is that a good description (and order)?
- margin that provides an order: I'm not happy with this part at all.
But, I'm not a native speaker so I can't really tell.
Your feedback is appreciated (it may also use different wording as long as the meaning is still there!
Best regards,
Uriel
What is exactly the margin that provides an order?
This is a translation from a Dutch sentence.
Context:
Every order consists of several products. Each product has a margin. The total margin of all products in the order is called "order margin".
The real question is:
"how do you know the real/actual margin of an order"
To come back to my sentence:
- is exactly: is that a good description (and order)?
- margin that provides an order: I'm not happy with this part at all.
But, I'm not a native speaker so I can't really tell.
Your feedback is appreciated (it may also use different wording as long as the meaning is still there!
Best regards,
Uriel
Top answer
Anonymous Each product has a margin. What kind of margin are you talking about? Elaborate on the context please.
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AnonymousEach product has a margin.What kind of margin are you talking about?
Elaborate on the context please.
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