Omar Ahmed Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Correct or not?

I wrote a paragraph about "tourism" and ended it with the following sentences:

A word still remains : tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country. To conclude, I would like to point out that what I have just written about tourism is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean!

Is this conclusion correct?

  

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Omar Ahmed Is this conclusion correct? It's a clever remark about what you have written, and it's grammatically correct if that's what you're asking about, but it's not really a conclusion. The previous sentence contains the conclusion: Tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country .

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Omar AhmedIs this conclusion correct?

It's a clever remark about what you have written, and it's grammatically correct if that's what you're asking about, but it's not really a conclusion. The previous sentence contains the conclusion: Tourism is greatly beneficial to everyone living in this country.

If this is to be a somewhat informal accoun