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I am not good at writing essay.

about my friend and I
My name is Eduardo , I am 22 years old. My friend name is Elvis , his 24 years old. We had been friends for 6 years.

I am a nice person , not trying to be conceited or anything. I had never sworn to people and families. I am very shy. My friend Elvis is a nice guy , but sometime he acts immature. He likes making fun of people and I think that's wrong because it makes them feel bad.

PS: I got a lot more to write.. >_<

YellowSnow · Accepted Answer

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BarbaraPA · Answer

My name is Eduardo. I am 22 years old. My friend's name is Elvis and he is 24 years old. We have been friends for 6 years.

I am a nice person, although I am not trying to sound conceited or anything. I had never sworn at people, especially my family. I am very shy. My friend Elvis is a nice guy, but sometime he acts immature. He likes making fun of people and I think that's wrong because it makes them feel bad.

XHealthY · Answer

thx , I am going to write more tomorrow

I updated a bit. ;/ can fix it please? lol

I am a nice person who likes to smile , but I am very shy, although I am not trying to sound conceited or anything. I had never sworn at people, especially my family. My friend Elvis is a nice guy, but sometime he acts immature. He likes making fun of people and I think that's wrong because it makes them feel bad.

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