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Jaokha Posted 17 years ago
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At the age of seven he accidentally killed his handicapped older brother, , who is undeserved by reprimand (rebuke), loathed by everyone in family. After Venon died become the parents’ upset, sad, relive and frustration and in the same time become Anwell disgusted, unforgivable and some time tormented by his family and people in town but Finnigan. Finnigan is a dangerous, wild, unkempt and mysterious boy who lives in the hills beyond town. The two make a pact that from now on, they will be each other’s reflection: Finnigan will do just bad things that Anwell wants to do but can’t and Anwell , adopted himself to Gabriel, will do only good things but ill , and this calls Gabriel for his surrender. To gather they make plans and share secrets each other. Gabriel has collect many small hates against the townspeople and several years later when fire grips his town so suspect Gabriel Finnigan as an arsonist without knowing that his own father is behind these arsons. The more each passing day, the less relationship between them. Surrender, Gabriel’s dog which both Gabriel and Finnigan do love it very much, has been thief and robber lately after hanging with Finnigan so Gabriel forced to kill it to stop Finnigan’s sprit in its blood.
  

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jaokha At the age of seven he accidentally killed his handicapped older brother, Vernon, who is undeserved by reprimand (rebuke), . ) After Venon died become the parents’ upset, sad, relive and frustration and in the same time become Anwell disgusted, unforgivable and some time tormented by his family and people in town but Finnigan. (this sentence is too long and complicated, I an't figure it out.

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jaokhaAt the age of seven he accidentally killed his handicapped older brother, Vernon,
who is undeserved by