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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Santiago has great determination and faith in himself; the boy wants to help Santiago and is upset when his parents want him to fish with more successful fishermen.
  

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Santiago has great determination and faith in himself; the boy wants to help Santiago and is upset when his parents want him to fish with more successful fishermen. It's a run-on sentence. It should be Santiago has great determination and faith in himself .

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Santiago has great determination and faith in himself; the boy wants to help Santiago and is upset when his parents want him to fish with more successful fishermen.

It's a run-on sentence. It should be
Santiago has great determination and faith in himself. The boy wants to help Sant