Completing sentence

Question

john had been admitted to a hospital. he had an accident yesterday while,____________________

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john had been admitted to a hospital. he had an accident yesterday while,____________________

Please note the following errors.

1) All proper names require capitalization.

2) In the given context, past perfect is incorrect because John is still in the hospital. So present perfect is the right tense.

I suggest: John has been admitted to the hospital. He had an accident yesterday while going to work. No comma after" while".

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