Oceanbluesky Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Comparison with "like" with a metaphor
Her eyes were hollow and empty
Just like her mind,
Which laid broken and shattered in a dark abyss,
Like an old and wounded demon.
Are comparison with "like" allowed with a metaphor allowed? I am using a metaphor for "mind", and then comparing it to something else. It sounds weird.
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oceanbluesky Just like her mind, Which lay broken and shattered in a dark abyss, Like an old and wounded demon. oceanbluesky Are comparison with "like" allowed with a metaphor allowed? I am using a metaphor for "mind", and then comparing it to something else.
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oceanblueskyJust like her mind,
Which lay broken and shattered in a dark abyss,
Like an old and wounded demon.
oceanblueskyAre comparison with "like" allowed with a metaphor allowed? I am using a metaphor for "mind", and then comparing it to something else. It sounds weird.
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