Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Compare two apartments for a friend.
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I saw two nice apartments last Monday.
1. 453 Lincoln Street, apartment 56: $690/month, 2 bedrooms, no pets, near the park, five minutes walk from the metropolitan station.
2. 856 Churchill Street, apartment 494: $850/month, 1 bedroom, pets OK, friendly neighborhoods, in front of a cinema, close to/near the train station.
The apartment on Lincoln Street is cheaper than the apartment on Churchill Street, but I know you prefer not to share.
Both apartments have a nice city view, large bedroom, big kitchen, and pretty garden.
The garage on Churchill Street is bigger.
Call me if you want me to show you both apartments.
I saw two nice apartments last Monday.
1. 453 Lincoln Street, apartment 56: $690/month, 2 bedrooms, no pets, near the park, five minutes walk from the metropolitan station.
2. 856 Churchill Street, apartment 494: $850/month, 1 bedroom, pets OK, friendly neighborhoods, in front of a cinema, close to/near the train station.
The apartment on Lincoln Street is cheaper than the apartment on Churchill Street, but I know you prefer not to share.
Both apartments have a nice city view, large bedroom, big kitchen, and pretty garden.
The garage on Churchill Street is bigger.
Call me if you want me to show you both apartments.
Top answer
One typo: neighborhood.
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1. across from a cinema. 2. I know you prefer not to share with a stranger, you need to find a good match.
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