commute 6

After John had got off the train, he saw the J and R's advertisement about Cannon cameras. He looked at the ads for a long time. It was the latest the Canon camera with 10 pixels and 3.8 zoom. The more he looked at it, the more he would like to go to J and R to check it out. He walked through the end and turned right and went through turnstile. As he was walking upstairs, he saw someone playing the guitar. John wanted to listen a melody and lyric. As the singer singed the first line, John cannot bear it.



Walking at the sidewalk for a while, he saw the store. He crossed the street and then entered it. A sales clerk told him to go to second floor. When he told a clerk on the second floor which camera he wanted, the clerk showed him the camera. John looked and played it for a while. He told the clerk that he wanted to buy it. Then he also bought 1 GB memory card.



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